had great potental
1/10 for the song, The song doesn't match up with the theme at all. This could of been a great story... But things like animation lacked greatly, i didnt like how he had a rectangular mouth open the whole time for a whole sentence. It's like talking with your mouth open, I recommend learning how to tween things like this and time it to the subtitles. Otherwise Nice try. I also noticed how you were trying to kill time doing long break scenes and ect.
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